In the Wake of Darkness

Its good


When the guy killed the high priestess you should put more emphasis into it, I didn't even know it had happened till after.

It seemed that you were still describing the scene when she was killed.

The <> represent when the drow are speaking in sign language.

okay, that clears things up, lol.
You really should put this on FF.net or a site geared for FF. Alot more readers + reviewers there.

I would really only say that there is a slight sensory overload at some points... well, more that you describing the enviroment/whatever distracted from something important, such as the instance that LP pointed out.

Chapter four is up.

this is cool so are the drow human liek if i may ask?

Onyxknight wrote:this is cool so are the drow human liek if i may ask?

"Dark Elves". . . they are like elves, but black. They live underground in giant underground cities.

Hey Rot, have you read any of Salvatore's writings in the Forgotten Realms?

Naturally. I've read most of his writings, though I haven't gotten through his most recent stuff. He is the main source of my knowledge of the drow.

Rotaretilbo wrote:Naturally. I've read most of his writings, though I haven't gotten through his most recent stuff. He is the main source of my knowledge of the drow.

That's awesome. I have his entire series with Drizz't Do'Urden in it. 17 books. Then I have the sellswords trilogy. I wouldn't mind getting the Cleric Quintet next. Have you read the Quintet yet? Would you recommend it?

Edit* - So far im on chapter 2. Very good rot. Really impressed with your knowledge of it all. You should try to get some of your work published, even if by some minor company. You never know, they may think that you have some real potential.

I've read Homeland through Passage to Dawn twice and The Silent Blade through The Two Swords once. I also read Servant of the Sword while it was still considered part of Paths of Darkness and the entire War of the Spider Queen series. I haven't gotten a chance to read any of The Cleric Quintet yet, nor any of The Sellsword Trilogy (other than Servant of the Sword) or Transitions. Once they release The Sellsword Trilogy and Transitions as Collector's Edition single bound books, I'll buy them. I would have bought all of the books separately, but it would have cost a bit more. It was $20 per Collector's Edition (average three books, with two having four books), with the except of The Hunter's Blades Trilogy, which they only had in hard back, which cost $30, and $8 per single book.

Oh, by the way, chapters five and six are up.

I have both transitions so far and I was stupid enough to buy the 30$ hardbacks. I have all the Drizz't Do'Urden books besides Sea of Swords.

Edit* - The Sellswords trilogy is really good. It's a nice change of pace from the usual characters.

Chapter Seven is up.

Its good but what is this fan fiction of?

Erm... I Figure its D&D, but where it is based is another story..

It's based around Dungeons and Dragons and is based in my own personal campaign setting (this all takes place southwest of Juftil, Seath).

Rotaretilbo wrote:It's based around Dungeons and Dragons and is based in my own personal campaign setting (this all takes place southwest of Juftil, Seath).

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Dungeon and dragons? Really rot you actually play that game