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Post by PiEdude on Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:42 am

Okay, I'm giving the comic thing another shot.
This time, I'm posting a script for a sample comic, and if you want to do it, just draw out the comic, then post it in this thread.

Here's the Sample Script:
<<Setting: Small city on snowy planet during a blizzard. Buildings are no higher than 3 stories>>
<<Universe: Star Wars, Empire vs Rebel era>>

*two rebel troops in snow gear move across roof, one is carrying long duffle bag// battle with bright red blaster bolts and some faded silhouettes of troops or walls being hit*
*blast from nearby ATST is seen*
*large blaster cannon bolts from ATST hit building which Rebel Troops are on*
*Rebel without duffle bag is blasted away from scene*
*other Rebel Troop takes cover*
*Rebel pulls small rocket launcher out of duffle bag*
*Rebel fires rocket at ATST and destroys it*

<<End Scene>>

Now, the actual comic that I'm making won't be Star Wars, I'm just using that as a template for this sample.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Lord Pheonix on Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:27 pm

There are not many artists on this forum.

And if there are they prefer to draw what THEY want, not what others feed them.

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by KrAzY on Thu Jul 02, 2009 4:53 pm

Lord Pheonix wrote:There are not many artists on this forum.

And if there are they prefer to draw what THEY want, not what others feed them.


*points at krazy

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Lord Pheonix on Thu Jul 02, 2009 5:48 pm

There are not many artist that ACTUALLY DO SHIT I should say

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Gauz on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:31 pm

Because we're not getting paid Very Happy
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:44 pm

Lord Pheonix wrote:There are not many artist that ACTUALLY DO SHIT I should say

Pwned.

Anyway, I need someone who can draw because I can't.

It's not that different from making a sig for someone.
I'm not holding anyone down and forcing them to draw, I'm just asking for help from anyone else who has this talent that I do not.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Lord Pheonix on Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:49 pm

It is different from making sigs

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:11 pm

I know it's different from making them, but requesting is the same concept.

I need help from somebody else to do something that I can't.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by LH Justin on Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:03 pm

PiEman wrote:
Lord Pheonix wrote:There are not many artist that ACTUALLY DO SHIT I should say

Pwned.

Anyway, I need someone who can draw because I can't.

It's not that different from making a sig for someone.
I'm not holding anyone down and forcing them to draw, I'm just asking for help from anyone else who has this talent that I do not.
The process of drawing a comic and making a sig. is completely different. They really have nothing in common unless you draw it in Photoshop.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:09 pm

I MEANT NOTHING ABOUT THE PROCESS!!

I meant the act of doing something for someone else because you have the skills they don't.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by BBJynne on Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:29 am

PiEman, if your comic is funny then it will be so regardless of whether it looks good or not

draw it yourself

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:33 am

It's not funny though.

I absolutley suck balls at drawing.
I'm just awful at it.

What I can do however, is write good.

There are dozens of series of comicst that are/were written by one person and drawn by another.

That's what Stan Lee and Steve Ditko did for some time.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:06 am

Okay, this is the best of my drawing ability on GIMP:


That took over 30 minutes to make.

This is why I cannot make this comic.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by KrAzY on Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:03 pm

draw it by hand and scan it in


i'm too busy drawing other things


LIKE GHOSTBUSTERS










just draw it yourself.... i've been doing comics slightly over a year... they sued to look like this


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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:05 pm

You guys have seen my hand drawings.

I'll bet you still can't get the stench of failure out of your eyes from seeing it.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Kasrkin Seath on Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:25 pm

thats an epic drawing krazy

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by CivBase on Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:50 pm

KrAzY wrote:draw it by hand and scan it in


i'm too busy drawing other things


LIKE GHOSTBUSTERS

AMAZING!

And pieman, drawing's not that hard. Anyone can do it (just maybe not as good as KrAzY...).

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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Gold Spartan on Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:01 pm

So Luck, instead of drawing Ghostbusters, why dont you give us a new comic before I have to kill you. Chainsaw

But that is an amazing drawing.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:20 pm

Okay, PiEman... here you go. Here is the comix you requested - this took me nearly three days and nine refrence photos to complete, but I didnt break anything expensive and it never irritated me so I guess you get it for free.

Oh, and the reason why they look fuzzy at some places is because I used a pencil - and I did a lot of shading. I also took it through an image manipulation program and darkened and sharpened the images before uploading them;

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Hope that was what you had in mind... and I won't be surprised at all if you all go ew at me. I'm used to that reaction by now, but hey. That's war.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by RX on Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:31 pm

Holy shit, that's nice!
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:42 pm

Etsharrin Hopsarrith wrote:Okay, PiEman... here you go. Here is the comix you requested - this took me nearly three days and nine refrence photos to complete, but I didnt break anything expensive and it never irritated me so I guess you get it for free.

Oh, and the reason why they look fuzzy at some places is because I used a pencil - and I did a lot of shading. I also took it through an image manipulation program and darkened and sharpened the images before uploading them;

Page 1


Page 2


Hope that was what you had in mind... and I won't be surprised at all if you all go ew at me. I'm used to that reaction by now, but hey. That's war.
-Etsharrin Hopsarrith

My God, I'm in love with this art!

Fantastic! Simply fantastic!
This is exactly what I wanted!

Well, technically I was picturing most of the white space as more of a darkish-gray instead, but that's just how I was picturing it in my head.

It's perfect, and it's just what I need.
I'll post another script tomorrow, only if you're still interested and able to do it of course.

I think we'll make a fine team, you and I.

EDIT: Two things.
First, I especially like how the trooper in the background of the last pane is putting his hand up sort of like "YAH!".
Lastly, you forgot to sign your name for once, lol.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:34 pm

what, you mean on the artwork? That stuff is owned by Lucasfilms Ltd... no reason to sign it. It's obvious the world round who that material belongs to.

And I think we'd both be better off if you sent me literary descriptions, since your display of artwork is sadly lacking and will ultimately get me nowhere...
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by PiEdude on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:37 pm

Lol, true, you all saw it in the ChatBox.

I can still have a Zoran Mech that I can scan onto the computer, it's a little better since I used a ruler to make the lines straight, and the whole thing is mainly made up of hexagons.
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by Gauz on Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:53 pm

KrAzY may I ask you how long it took to draw that amazing ghostbuster drawing?

And good job on the comic EH, your name is too long ><
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Re: I'm gonna try this again...

Post by KrAzY on Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:28 pm

was a 30 minute quickie


EH (I think the acronym is gonna stick) I think thats pretty awesome looking. definately not eew worthy
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