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Post by Rasq'uire'laskar on Thu Nov 12, 2009 4:44 pm

It's a fanfic I posted a while back on Fanfiction.net. It's just a oneshot, and I was wondering what you guys think of it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5455003/1/Deus_ex_Grana

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Re: Deus Ex Grana

Post by KrAzY on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:56 am

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Re: Deus Ex Grana

Post by kslidz on Tue Nov 17, 2009 1:43 am

are you srsly responding L O L
for your posts krazy

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Re: Deus Ex Grana

Post by Rotaretilbo on Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:58 am

Well, that was a fun read. Just wish you'd have gone into more detail concerning the interview. Ending was a touch anticlimactic. A lot of build up and then lots of ambiguousness.

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Re: Deus Ex Grana

Post by Rasq'uire'laskar on Tue Nov 17, 2009 4:08 pm

You're right. That is a problem.
I was writing it out, and I really couldn't think of more to add to the interview. I really should have done something, outlined the company more, but I just wanted to get the fic out. Sad

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