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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Ascendant Justice on Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:17 am

Cool.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by The Pariah on Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:24 am

yeah its a good read just remember what i said in the CB

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Vigil on Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:26 am

I remember, don't worry.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Ruski on Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:33 am

That was good Vigil. I want to see another chapter.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Nocbl2 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:05 am

I sense a little "Wall-E" influence in this story.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by The Pariah on Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:11 am

Nocbl2 wrote:I sense a little "Wall-E" influence in this story.


oh i bet you love wall-e

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Spekwyse on Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:23 am

sargentbilco wrote:
Nocbl2 wrote:I sense a little "Wall-E" influence in this story.


oh i bet you love wall-e

I do...

Anyways, I like the story so far...

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Nocbl2 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:29 am

I suggest changing the quotes from ' to ".

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Vigil on Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:24 am

Nocbl2 wrote:I sense a little "Wall-E" influence in this story.


I haven't seen it.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by The Pariah on Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:58 pm

' = quotation mark
" = speech mark

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Vigil on Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:20 pm

sargentbilco wrote:' = quotation mark
" = speech mark


That wasn't a typo.

I was told a long time ago that ' ' was okay for use in dialogue.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Nocbl2 on Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:50 pm

Vigil wrote:
sargentbilco wrote:' = apostrophe
" = speech mark


That wasn't a typo.

I was told a long time ago that ' ' was okay for use in dialogue.
No, it's "Blah." not 'Blah.'

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Ziggy on Thu Dec 24, 2009 2:16 am

Nocbl you seem to be spewing out a lot of incorrect shit.

' can be used for dialogue as well.

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Death no More on Thu Dec 24, 2009 2:11 pm

Ziggy wrote:Nocbl you seem to be spewing out a lot of incorrect shit.

' can be used for dialogue as well.
Any difference between the two? Or is it just emphasis?

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Re: Steward's Stand.

Post by Vigil on Tue Feb 23, 2010 1:07 pm

Wow, Two months later and no Chapter 4?

This guy is soo lazy.

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