Haro Regends: The Package: Part 2

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Haro Regends: The Package: Part 2

Post by PiEdude on Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:50 am

Well, I'm not going to rob Vigil the pleasure of reviewing this one, and I've finished it. Here's a few problems:

Spoiler:

1. They toss Halo lines around like salt on my driveway this time of year. And they actually threw a Dark Knight line in there ("We make our own luck").
2. The Splazer
3. The Covenant have green blood.
4. The Elite's faces still look like fish, with their dead eyes and awkward mandibles.
5. Guess what (or who) the package was? Halsey. Yeah, they've officially crucified anything left that could be considered remotely canon.


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Re: Haro Regends: The Package: Part 2

Post by CivBase on Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:51 am

It's already been reviewed by Vigil (in his original package thread)

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Re: Haro Regends: The Package: Part 2

Post by PiEdude on Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:55 am

Oh, I didn't read that.

Well, I highlighted a few flaws anyway.

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Re: Haro Regends: The Package: Part 2

Post by Vigil on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:38 am

CivBase wrote:It's already been reviewed by Vigil (in his original package thread)


ROFL

Silly PIE.

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