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Re: Chronicles of Klindaron

Post by Offensive Bias on Sun Oct 31, 2010 7:21 pm

Could I please have some feedback?

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Re: Chronicles of Klindaron

Post by Ruski on Sun Oct 31, 2010 9:19 pm

I saw a few errors in spelling and grammer, but otherwise was pretty good.

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Re: Chronicles of Klindaron

Post by PiEdude on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:20 pm

I think good, is it, also, as well, too.

Also.

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