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Post by PiEdude on Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:05 pm

This is a Halo FF that Hops is writing (she says book 5 isn't done yet, but the rest are) and I think it's really great. The only problems I'm encountering right now are the physical problems that go with staring at the same text for long periods of time.

I've gotta warn you though, it's very long compared to most fan fiction. Each Book has a few chapters (book one has seven), and the chapters themselves are long.

I hope to finish this before spring break is over, but trying to do it in one day is just inhuman.

Book 1; To Be An Elite

Book 2; Brotherhood

Book 3; Lost Blood

Book 4; Mjolnir Savvy

Book 5; The Augment

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:54 am

O.O Eh... wow, PiEdude! This is flattering! I was actually thinking about writing up the BBC into the documents and then freeposting it again here so that people can read it straight off without being redirected.

But I guess this works?

Thanks for the vote of awesomeness!! Very Happy
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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by BBJynne on Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:32 am

PiEdude wrote:I think it's really great.

I'd agree to that

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:47 pm

Aww, wow, thanks, BB! You guys are all awesome! I put up another chapter, in case anyone is interested?
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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Offensive Bias on Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:56 pm

I have a problem with reading long things over the Internet. I could read something from the start, which doesn't require me to continously read. But with a book, I will read it start to finish. But over the Internet, I just can't. If someone is lucky, I will read the first four chapters. And then quit and write a small, "Good job!" comment.

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Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:46 pm

Aw, darn. I would have loved to hear what you had to say about it... you seem like someone with a good eye and strong vocabulary for things like reviews and such... you could print it out? I won't be mad.

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Kasrkin Seath on Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:50 pm

zomg its so long

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Post by Kasrkin Seath on Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:36 am

book one done... addicted

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Post by Kasrkin Seath on Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:09 am

Numero three

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:47 pm

Aww, that's awesome, Seath! Book 5 is officially a wrap... just holding out on the last chapter for a spell to make sure I get as many reviews out of it as I possibly can, haha! Very Happy

I'm going to take a short break from fanfic writing, though... but rest assured, there WILL be a book 6, and (from what I can tell) also a book 7.

Haha, 7's even a Halo numeral!

(although... Neutral I seem to have some minor nudging going on for even more material than merely just... we shall see. I'm not about to get ahead of myself with this, so I might well never write book 8 even if it does manifest and then beg.)

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Post by Etsharrin Hopsarrith on Sun May 09, 2010 11:08 pm

BOOK SIX HAS BEGUN TREMBLE IN FEAR

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by Rasq'uire'laskar on Mon May 10, 2010 12:21 am

Well, not too bad. Only a max of seventeen chapters a story, I guess, so it's not...
*Looks at word count.
*Gets out calculator.
*Compares to "Isolation".
*Glares at Etsharrin Hopsarrith.

I'll have to look into this...

Offensive Bias wrote:I have a problem with reading long things over the Internet. I could read something from the start, which doesn't require me to continously read. But with a book, I will read it start to finish. But over the Internet, I just can't. If someone is lucky, I will read the first four chapters. And then quit and write a small, "Good job!" comment.

Protip: Fanfiction.net has bookmarks. Handy!

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Re: Hammer of Thor Chronicles -Etsharrin Hopsarrith

Post by PiEdude on Mon May 10, 2010 12:52 am

Rasq'uire'laskar wrote:Well, not too bad. Only a max of seventeen chapters a story, I guess, so it's not...
*Looks at word count.
*Gets out calculator.
*Compares to "Isolation".
*Glares at Etsharrin Hopsarrith.

I'll have to look into this...

I ror'd.

Rasq'uire'laskar wrote:
Protip: Fanfiction.net has bookmarks. Handy!

Wait, wut?
I can finally finish it without worrying about having to lose my place and start over!
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